User blog comment:AdolescentAuthor/Archived Section of Rise of Solaris I/@comment-2002809-20150309192324/@comment-25483595-20150312055911

Well, anybody can pick apart the entire fanfiction for literally anything, and they'd be right. Regradless, you got some sick moves. The sweetest detail I think was developing on the Organization XIII, explaining who's who. Makes the story less superfical, more mature.

I think I'll leave the different versions where they are, to preserve the originality. I'll make some adjustments here, honestly but I have no idea what to do. '=/